Thursday, 29 June 2017

My Secret Lover by Shreeyu

Posted by Unknown on June 29, 2017 with No comments

My_Secret_Lover

#Chapter_10

#Confession_Special

Evening

8pm

Swara was watching TV in her house when the doorbell rang

She opened the door and there was Akshat standing with a smile on his face

Swara: Akii...!! Get in..!!

Akshat got in and sat on the couch
Akii: Cupcake chalo get ready fast we r getting late?

Swara looked at him with confused look

Swara:Where r we going and when did you told me abt this ???

Akii:Oh Han I forgot to tell u... You go and get ready we r going out for a movie... Jaldi Karo Cupcake 8:30  ka show hai ! It will take 10 minutes at least to reach there

Swara: Akii have u gone mad? U shud have told me earlier na...Now...(interrupted)

Akshat dragged her towards her room and pushed her inside and said : Cupcake m waiting in drawing room get ready fast

Swara left with no other option got ready

Akshat on call
Åk:yes just come here after 5 minutes....

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Sanskar opened the door of Swara's room and remembered how he and Akii made a plan according to which Akii took Swara out so that he can do the necessary arrangements

He opened the door of balcony  and started doing the work

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After 3 hours and some fifty minutes the door of Swara's house got open

She entered the house cursing Akii as they went out but he kept her hungry and didn't allowed her to have anything

Swara:Oh God I'll seriously kill that idiot... (She moved towards the room to change when she was abt to open her wardrobe )

When suddenly someone came from back and closed her eyes with a cloth gently tying it

Swara was abt to shout when that person kept his hands on her mouth

Person:Shhhhh

Swara recognized the person and slowly whispered : Sanskar

Sanskar: Han Swara it's me...!!

(Swara was shocked to find him there)

Before she could say something or even understand something Sanskar took her to the balcony
Leaving her on the door step he went in

Sanskar: Swara just two minutes

Swara was really shocked to react anything

Swara (gaining some senses are asked): Sanskar..u.. u here???

Sanskar ignored her question and continued His work

Swara was abt to remove the blind fold just when Sanskar saw her and said: Swara don't u trust me just wait for few minutes

After a couple of minutes Sanskar gradually removed the blind fold from her eyes and asked her to open her eyes slowly

"Swara now slowly open your eyes"

Swara lifted her eyelids and was astounded by the sight in front of her

There were several heart shaped candles arranged beautifully in a specific pattern...
They were arranged in the three beautiful words of English language — I Love You
Surrounded by rose petals

Swara was amazed to c this, her heart was filled with utmost happiness

She turned back and her eyes caught Sanskar's eyes who was standing just behind her trying to decode her feelings

She could not control her happiness and just hugged him tightly while few drops of tears escaped from her eyes...
Sanskar's hands were reaching Swara's back to hug her back when Swara Suddenly broke the hug and looked into his eyes
Whereas Sanskar who was till now thinking that Swara shud not feel that, became sad thinking that his thoughts r coming true
Swara: Sanskar u need not to pretend that you love me for my happiness... I know that u don't love me and I don't want to be a burden on you...
(Saying so she was abt go when Sanskar caught her one hand)

He pulled her making her turn and looked straight into her eyes

Sanskar :Swara I would just say one thing after that u r free to judge me
' Sometimes I wonder what my world would be like
If I didn't have someone like you in my life.

I come back to reality only to see
That I wouldn't be myself without you and me.

I am looking forward to the future, hoping you'll be with me,
Growing old together and being happy as can be.

I want to spend the rest of my life making it up to you.
I know all of the hell I've been putting you through.

I am so sorry, and I can't say that enough,
But I hope that's the last time it will ever be rough.

I love you completely, with all of my heart,
I will love you forever, 'til death do us part.'

Saying so a tear rolled down his cheek...

Swara: San..skaaaar (whispered not able to react after seeing so much of love in his eyes which was only n only for her)

Sanskar bent down on his knees before her
" Swara, u r the best thing that ever happened to me , you r like a rainbow who colored my life... I know that I had hurt u a lot in the past... But now after realizing my true feelings for you I want to start afresh, I just want to say I LOVE YOU SWARA,I LOVE YOU WITH MY HEART AND SOUL...!!!
I KNOW U LOVE ME EVEN MORE... WOULD U GIVE THIS IDIOT A CHANCE TO LOVE U LIKE U DO...!!! WOULD U ACCEPT MY LOVE SWARA...!!

Before he could even complete his sentence Swara just rushed into his arms... And started crying...

Swara:YES , I WOULD, I LOVE YOU TOO SANSKAR... I LOVE UH TOO...!!!

They kept hugging each other for a couple of minutes when Sanskar said breaking the hug: Swara chalo now get up only 30seconds left for 12... Now come on cut the cake

Sanskar had kept a small(bahut small nhi😂😂😂½kg ka) cake on the table

Swasan got up from the floor and as soon as the clock showed both its hands on 12

Swara cut the cake while Sanskar sang

Sanskar: Happy Birthday to uh... Happy Birthday to u... Happy birthday dear Swara , Happy birthday to u...!!!

Swara raised a piece of cake towards Sanskar's mouth but he held her hand and made her have the first bite .... Then Swara fed him .... Just then Swara's phone rang , but she was unable to attend the call as her hands were not clean... Sensing the situation Sanskar accepted the call and held the phone near to Swara's ear...

Swara: Hello

Other side: Happy Birthday Princess...!!

Swara:Thnk u Papa

Shekhar: God bless uh..!!
Sharmishta:Happy Birthday Beta...God bless u..!!
(Call was on speaker from their side)

Swara: Thnk u Mom
(she continued talking to them for few minutes on her own as she cleaned her hands with a tissue paper)

By the time she was talking Sanskar started arranging dinner for them (After all he and Akii kept her hungry from so long)

Swara:(on call) Han oky bye Papa...good night...!!

She turned after cutting the call and by the aroma of the food she recognized the dish and her eyes started shining...

Sanskar: Swara come and have dinner...!! I know Akshat kept u hungry actually I asked him to do so, so that we can have dinner together

Swara: Thnk u so much Sanskar for everything...I still can't believe that this is not my dream but reality...!

Sanskar: Swara no need to thank me in fact I shud be the one thanking u for coming in my life..
(Diverts the topic)
Now come fast sit here, or else your white pasta of you so called favorite restaurant will become cold...

Swara:Han Han Han... My white pasta... God I just love it ....

[Ah ha ha... White pasta!!! I just love it... My mouth is watering after writing this...!!)

Swasan finished their dinner just then Swara's phone rang...

On call
Akshat:Happy Birthday Cupcake...!!

Swara: So u r wishing me so late...

Akshat:Arey nhi Cupcake... I thought not to disturb u both...

(Continued talking for awhile)

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Swasan were sitting on the floor of the balcony... They were just talking and in between admiring each other

After all they spent whole one month without each other... Without each other's talks... Without each other's presence, and without each other's love... For one the love was realized and for another it was unrealized love

But whatever happens, happens for good... After all there's a saying  "Ishwar Yat Karoti Shobhnam Karoti"

They were busy talking to each other without realizing the time, Swara was sitting beside Sanskar and her head was on Sanskar's shoulder...

Just then Sanskar's eyes fell on his watch...which showed 1:30 am

They were so engrossed in each other that they completely forgot abt the time...

Sanskar( whispered): Swara

Swara :Hmmm

Sanskar:Swara, I shud go now, 1:30 ho gya

Swara:Thodi der ruk jao Sanskar (wait for sometime Sanskar)

Fifteen minutes passed....

Sanskar: Swara...

Swara:hannn

Sanskar: Shall I leave?

Swara remained quite...

Sanskar also wanted to stay but it was already late, he stood up to wash his hands (as while talking they finished half of the cake and he was the one feeding both of them so)
(Idiot how can he stay with those chipchipe hands )

***********

Sanskar came out from washroom when he saw Swara sitting on  the couch of her room with a guitar

Before he could ask her she began playing it and started singing

Swara: Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori (x2)
Sufi iska rang haye

Isme jo tera khwaab piroya (x2)
Neendein bani patang

Dil bharta nahin
Aankhen rajjti nahin (x2)

(Sanskar came and sat beside her lost in her voice)
Chahe kitna bhi dekhti jaaun
Waqt jaaye main rok na paaun

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja soneya
Tu thodi der aur thehar jaa

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thori der aur thehar jaa

(He started singing)

Sanskar: Haaye din tere bin ab jee na paaye
Din tere bin ab jee na paaye
Saans na leti raat
Ishq karein tere honthon se

Ishq karein mere honthon se
Bas ik teri baat

Teri doori na sahoon
Door khud se rahoon (x2)

Tere pehlu mein hi reh jaun
Tu hi samjha jo main chaahun

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja soneya
Tu thodi der aur thehar jaa

Swara:Tu thodi dair aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thodi dair aur thehar jaa

Swasan together :Naiyo lagna, naiyo lagna
Tere bin dil mera (x4)

Sanskar :Dil minnate kare
Na tu jaa na pare (x2)

Tere jaane se jee na paaun

Swara:Tu thodi dair aur thehar ja soneya
Tu thodi dair aur thehar jaa

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thodi der aur thehar jaa

Sanskar:Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja.. (thehar ja)

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja
Tu thodi der..
Bas thodi der aur thehar ja

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Pheww.... Completed this chapter...

MSL finally completed 10 chapters... Thnk u so much for the love and support u gave till today....

I really worked hard for this chapter, so really curious to know whether u liked it or not...*fingers crossed

And if there r any silent readers at least comment on this one guys .... As I said story is moving towards it end... Hardly few chapters r left...!!

Wednesday, 28 June 2017

Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya by Zuzu Part 12

Posted by Unknown on June 28, 2017 with No comments

#Aur_Pyaar_Ho_Gaya

Hello..,
My dear readers... As per last part I asked u all d opinions on some Qsns... Am vry glad ki u all have given such great response.. n showed ua interest.. So here I used sme idea given by one of reader.. He comnted on dat and gave a part which ull lyk so dz part dat is part 12 ill give partly credit to him Thanks #Vinay_Kartik
All gave me response.. I liked itt bt dz one am including plz guys dnt feel bad next tym pakka ill add others opinions :)

So back to our story..

Recap of part #11 -"Swara in white gaun.. Sanskaar to reach to mask party in farm house..SwaSam dance.. Sanskaar's anger.. SwaSan aggressive dance in which she is unaware dat he is sanskaar "

#Part_12

Swara slowly removed d mask of d person... N she was shocked to see sanskaar... Before she can ask anything Music started and sanskaar made her dance with him... Dz tym it was a romantic dance..

Dance form -"slow romantic dance :p "

Music starts..

He pulls her near.. very near..

Holds her from her waist with both d hands... her hands were snaked around his neck.. both were looking in each others eyes...

🎤🎤🎤🎤
Girl -"Kar do zara, lafze bayaan
Jo sunna cahe mera mann...
Haan haan
kar do zara lafze bayaan jo sunna cahe mera man.. "🎤🎤🎤🎤

Dey both were lost in each others eyes finding them in each others eyes... dey were moving slowly slowly with d melody of song..

🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤
Boy -"Main jism hoon tu hai meri rooh
Main jism hoon tu hai meri rooh
Tujhe hoor ki khushamat main doon"🎤🎤🎤🎤

Sanskaar turns her now she was facing her back towrds him.. her back was crushed in his chest .. his hands were on her belly n her hands were on his hands.. Sanskaar lyed his head on her head side lyk.. both eyes were closed...

🎤🎤🎤🎤
Girl - " Oooo kar do zara lafze bayan jo sunna cahe mera man.. hmm ummm Haan haan
Lik do zara alf naya panno pe dil k sanam...
Haan haan 🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤

Sanskaar made der turn round.. holding her finger around.. n den she falls in his hand embrace.. In such a way.. her right hand was in his left hand.. his right hand on her waist.. her left hand passing through his shoulder to neck.. Swara was bend towrds ground.. Dey had a continuous eyelock...

🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤 
Girl - " Main Khush zameen badal hai tu
Main khushk zameen badal h tu .. muj pe baras jaa izaazat me doon..
Haan haan
Kar do zara lafze bayan jo sunna cahe mera man .. haan haan Keh do zara ye jism-o-jaan kardoge mujhpe nazar.. ..ummm aa haan 🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤

Sanskaar lifts her.. again she was facing her back towrds him..

🎤🎤🎤🎤
Boy-"Mere ishq ki..Imtehaan h tu
Mere ishq ki..Imtehaan h tu
Baaki main tab tak jab tak h tu " 🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤

Sanskaar makes her turn to him self.. she puts her both hands on his shoulders.. n he puts his hands were on her waist.. Swara made her head relax on his chest.. Under her neck.. dey both were dancing so closely... He slowly took her in to a cute hug.. her hands were still on his shoulders making more grip.. n eyes closed.. n face under his neck near his chest.. Making a way lyk she is trying to listen d sng which his heart was singing for her.. It was d bst protection for her in d whole world she thought..
Dey looked lyk princess n prince in d dim light n romantic environment

🎤🎤🎤🎤
Girl - " Kar do zara lafze bayan jo sunna cahe mera man ... ummm 🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤

Song ends... n swara's dream also with the claps all over d party .. (Yeah u got it right dz all dance was a dream of swara.. She came to senses :p )

Swara was confused why she was thinking of him.. n wht she thought ki it was sanskaar.. d masked man.. again she thought y dz man was so rude in dancing.. before she could think anything else the man (Sanskaar) rushed out..

Swara went back of him to ask him d reason n to find who he was...

Der Sam got a call frm her mom to come home fast as his dad had some important work related to him.. he rushed his house ..

Sanskaar stepped out of party wearing d mask.. swara came back of him.. dey were quite away frm d party entrance.. Swara for once called wht her heart said "Sanskaar "

D man stopped bt dint turn.. just moved his head side.. n saw she was heading towards him.. 

No tym she came infrnt of him n asked

Swara-"Ho kon tum.. n ese dance kia mere sath.. mene kya kia tha ki itna rude ban rahe the.... "

He moved towrds her n kept his finger on her lips making her stp her wrds.. swara felt something in heart.. n she slowly said -"Sansssskaaaarrrr "

N slowly moved her hands towrdsv his mask n slowly removed d mask..  She was shocked to see d man behind d mask was Sanskaar...

She donno y hugged him...bt he dint hugged her back .. She broked d hug n said -"Sanskaar tum yaha pr k se n vo dance kya tha itna gussa kis baat pr ?? " (She asked innocently )

Sanskaar fumed with anger n Said catching her shoulders tight..
-"Main yaha aaya tumhe acha nahi laga hoga na.. tumhari party spoil ho gai hogi.. jab tum yaha party k lie aayi thi toh y did u said it's a hang out with frnds... me yaha tumhe surprise dene aaya tha ... tumse milne aaya tha par mujhe hi surprise mil gaya.. Wow.. (His eyes were red with anger)

Swara - " Sanskaar wht ua saying.. muje khud ko nahi pata tha ki yaha party h.. mere frnds ne hang out bola tha I was shocked after reaching here to c dz party "

Sanskaar moved more close to her.. n both were looking in each others eyes.. he said -"Oh really swara.. den dz party attire ye kya h... k se typ ki drss phni h tumne... ye shoulder less gaun..."

Swara - " (Holding his hands up frm elbow.. ) Sanskaar.. ye mere frnd neha ne yaha laya tha cz she knew ki me yaha hang out k lie simple Drs me aungi.. so I had no option to wear dz.. "

Sanskaar - " (Some anger cooled down.. n nw was talking in a concern tone ) Swaraaa u knw log tumhe kis tarah se dek rahe the.. Tumhe ese dek kr comments pass kar rahe the ishare kr rahe the.. Ye drss tum pr bht suit kr rahi h bt swara yaha pr log tumhe ese dekh rahe the mujsy bardash nahi hua.. ki ko tumhe ese deke.. "

He immediately removed his blazer n made her wear itt...

Swara she felt happy inside bt donno y she was feeling happy.. She feeled dat he care a lot for her.. bt she got angry on him..

He took her into d hug.. bt she breaked itt n said -"Tumne muj pr dout kia.. mene koi jhut nahi bola tha .. mere sath ese behave kia itna aggression.. (She was crying)

He flt wht he did.. Sanskaar says -"Swara am srry "

Swara - " No sanskaar no "

N she ran inside d house took stairs up to room which she was supposed to live dat nyt in Ridz house..

Sanskaar hit his leg on floor n said -"Ohh Shit man.. i hurted her .. I can't see her crying"

He too ran behind him.. As party was goin on no one noticed dem...

Sam had already left d party informing his frnds ...

Flash back :-
Sam -"Yaar sun Niel I have to leave yaar dad ko kuch imp kaam aagaya h..so ".

Avi -"Bt yaar aaj tu swara ko bolne wala tha na"

Sam -"I knw bt guys dad ne bulaya h means imp kaam hoga ill tell her bt not today guys I have to leave ok bye "

Neha avi .. Ridz ... Niel felt bad fr him "

Flash back ends

Sanskaar went back of her no one noticed them.. swara got in room n was about to close bt sansk stopped her n got in n closed d door.. Swara went towrds window..

Sanskaar went to her n kept hand on her shoulder.. she jerked his hand.. he made her look to him..
Sanskaar - " Am sorry swara an really sry " (Catching his ears )

Swara childishly -"Jao muje tumse baat nahi krni (n turns her face to other side )

Sanskaar -"Toh meri laddu mujsy baat nahi karegi.. Mujsy glti ho gai laddu am sry na plz maaf kar do "

Swara - " No Huh 😔😪😏 "

Sanskaar came to her side n hugged her.. bt she strted to beat him in a childish manner.. he hugged her tight .. she was beating him on his chest.. with her hands.. n saying -"No no u scolded me .. u shouted on me " She continues beating him.. n tries to free him frm his hug bt he hold her more tightly...  caressing her hairs...n kiss her in her hairs ... n was saying -"Am sry laddu bt I got angry d person d way dey looked at u.. no one can stare my laddu with dat sight "

She was cntinuesly beating him.. n blabbering -"U shouted on me "

Sanskaar - " Laddu plz calm down plzz .. (Caressing her hairs ) "

After much struggle She calmed down.. N her fighting turned into d hug... she hugged him back.. tightly... Crushing her head in his chest "

Both became calm..

Sanskaar felt dat she feels embarrassed n dey broke d hug after 10 minutes ..

Swara's eyes were dwn.. Sanskaar broked d silence n Said in a teasing way -"Acha toh meri laddu roti b h.. u look bhootni while crying "

He laughed n sat on bed ...

Swara - " Haawww me bhootni.. Toh tum kya ho "

She went near her.. n took a pillow.. n strted beating him ...

Sanskaar -"Arey.. Arey Sherni I was just kidding.."

Dey both started a pillow fight.. bt sanskaar became serious.. he hold her hand and said -"Really Swara I can't c any one seeing u dat way.. i really got vry angry.. am sry i hurted u (emotionally)

Swara -"No sanskaar dnt say sry.. Muje acha laga u care fr me a lot dat no one do for me "

Sanskaar to bring her out dz said -"Madam aap k chkkr me mene dinner b mene a hi kia h.. "

Swara - "Ohh .. wait me avi laayi hu "

Sanskaar catches her hand whn she was about to get up

Sanskaar -"Ek shrt pr "
Swara - " Kyaa (cnfused) "

Sanskaar - " Tumhe b khana hoga mere sath "

She smiled n said - " Ok "

She went down. D party was Over .. der was no one in d hall ..

Ridz avi  .. Niel neha all went to der room.. thinking swara must b tired so let not disturb her n let her sleep..

She took d Dinner n went up.. Sanskaar was sitting on bed..
She kept d dinner on table n asked him to eat.. he took d chapati  made swara eat first frm his hand ... she took d bite.. sme curry had stick to her lips..he showed him to clean bt whn she was not able to he removed itt by his fingers frm her soft lips.. Swara to made him eat by her hands .. Swara was unaware of her feelings.. by she was feeling Awsm with him..

Both looked at each other with so much of love...

Precap -"SwaSan fun enjoying "

*******To Be Continued*******

Guys am sry am not up to mark.. bt plz do tell hw it was ..

Waiting for your Precious Feedback .. :)

#Patel

It All Started With A Lust - By Sarah Ep- 7

Posted by Talha Safi on June 28, 2017 with 4 comments
IT ALL STARTED WITH LUST
EPI-7
By#Sarah
Hii guyz m back do u want me to end ths ff???if nt den plzzz do comment bcz first in the chat session u broke shubhi's heart yesterday in ghayal u broke renu dii nd jia's heart thn monica's heart im already broken bcz seriously nly 25 comments in NEVER SAY I LOVE U wow 👏👏👏 vry nice shubhi renu dii monica jia have patience tht thy r bearing ths but m nt m straight forward if i dint get atleats 50 comment in tgs episode thn ill give note like jia gave nt to continue her ff its my cousin marriage going on house is full with guest's but phir bhi i m writing bcz i don't want to hurt my readers but wht ur giving us back nly empty comment box???great cant u waste your precious 1 minute to click the like button nd a simple comment like nice awesome but plzz comment im wid jia nd i support her decision ok nw its enough nw plzz read the story im begging. 
#it_all_started_with_lust_epi_7_by_sarah
Recap:satandi raglak swasan maasti nd sanskaar got a call. 

EPISODE-7
**MATURE_CONTENT_**
San:(screaming) ahhhhhhhhh hw dare he sayyy hw dare heeeee
Swa:(scared) san........sans,.........sanskaar ppzz....plzzzz 
San:(holds her hands tightly) Sayyy hw dare he touch u han hw dare he dont u knw u r nly mine haan ur nly mine.  
Swa:(crying) but he touched me y u spoiled your image infront of media u dont love me its all lust.  
San:(leaves her) there is nothing like love love can nly hurt u its all money name reputation ur also here fr money nd aadi. 
Swa:no sanskaar i......
San:its ok (angry) but remember one thing no one can touch u ur mine nly mine.
Swa:but y u beat him.  
San:(with blood shot eyes) bcz he touched u misbeahsved wid u nd love is nly pain like she gave me. (he closed his eyes nd cluched his fist)
Swa:(fumbles) who.....who was she. 
San:(gets hyper) no one no one (screamed) no one (he gets mad nd starts to throw all thing kept in the room😉)
Swa:plzzz sanskaar come down shez no one yes shez no one. 
San:(dint listen) ahhhhhhhh
Swa:(donno wht to do she holds him nd started kissing him wildly on his lips sanskaar starts to push her but soon he starts to melt's nd starts to respond her kiss he starts to carse her bare back(guyz see swara's dress on cover)
Swara starts breathing loudly as Sanskar touches her. It then starts to rain(outside)
(dill mei chupa lunga frm waja tum ho starts to play in the bg)
tere saamne aa jaane se
ye dil mera dhaRka hai
ye ghalti nahi hai teri
kusoor nazar ka hai
( Sanskar puts his hand on swaras belly and he starts kissing her bare back and then neck and then turns her)


because of your coming in front of me,
my heart has beaten (fast),
it's not your mistake,
but my sight's fault.

jis baat ka tujhko Dar hai
wo karke dikha doonga...
(Sanskar then pins her to the wall.
Swara: San
Sanskar puts his finger on swaras lips. They then slowly start kissing and then intensely as swara starts tiptoeing and ruffling sans hair. They then stop and they hug.)

the thing you are afraid of,
I'll do that...

aise na mujhe tum dekho
seene se laga loonga
tumko main chura loonga tumse
dil mein chhupa loonga 

(He then carries her while kissing her. He then slowly starts placing her on the bed.)

don't look at me like that,
or I'll embrace you..
I'll steal you from yourself,
and hide you in my heart.

tumse pehle, tumsa koi
humne nahi dekha 
tumhe dekhte hi mar jaayenge
ye nahi tha socha
(he unziped swara's dress (while kissing) nd swara starts to unbutton sanskaar's shirt)
Before you, I've not seen 
anyone like you...
I'd not thought I'll be dead
as soon as I saw you...
(soon both ar naked sanskaar starts to bite her neck while swara was heavily panting sanskaar name)

baahon mein teri, meri
ye raat Thehar jaaye
tujh mein hi kahin pe meri
subaha bhi guzar jaaye 
( sanskaar kissed swara's cleavage while she closed her eyes he starts to suck her blossoms while shez brusing his hair)

I wish my night passes 
in your arms,
and in you only somewhere,
even my morning passes.

jis baat ka tujhko Dar hai
wo kar ke dikha dunga…
( he came down to her inner thighs nd kissed her there swara cluched the bedsheet tightly)
aise na mujhe tum dekho
seene se laga loonga
tumko main chura loonga tumse
dil mein chhupa loonga 
(soon he enters into her make her moun loudly his name nd thy had their climax)
dil mein chhupa loonga...

(Sanskaar was sleeping while hugging swara thy were wraped in a silk duvet swara was smiling nd brusing his hair)
Swa:(smiling) thank god fr tgs gift but y he is ths much concerned fr me if he no no its all lust but today.(she closed her eyes nd starts to think the flashback fr ths happend😉😉😉
(Screen freezes)
So wht is tgs wht has happend who misbeahsved wid swara to knw more stay tuned. 
Plzz atleast 50 comment fr tgs chapter or otherwise ill also discontinue my ff like jia did. 
Precap:flashback
Credit: SARAH

Sunday, 25 June 2017

My Secret Lover by Shreeyu

Posted by Unknown on June 25, 2017 with No comments

#My_Secret_Lover

#Chapter_9_b

Recap-Swara & Sanskar remembering their golden days; Swara-Akshat convo regarding love; Sanskar realizing his feelings for Swara finally

It was a new day, filled with new hopes and new realizations...

The sun rays fell upon Sanskar who was sleeping clutching his diary tightly and a smile on his face...

Soon he woke up due to the disturbing sun rays...

Sanskar's POV

I never thought that I would ever fall for someone... At least not now... But it happened, m really sad as I realized it late and Swara had to cry because of me... But I can't express my feelings... How great it feels when u realize u r in love with someone... And if this someone is your best friend then your happiness have no bounds... Similarly m so happy being in love with Swara... But I don't know how will I confess my love to her... I hope she would not take me wrong... After that meeting she always ignored me... We didn't even said a hi to each other... The things suddenly became too awkward to work on any thing...

(His thoughts were broken by the continuous knocks on his room's door )

POV ends....

Sanskar opened the door and found his mom who was trying to wake him up as he was getting late for college unaware of the fact that he is already up but lost in his thoughts...

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Swara was still sleeping in her room... Last night they all returned late from the function otherwise she is an early riser

Soon her sleep got disturbed when she felt someone caressing her hair

She lazily opened her eyes and saw her dad sitting beside her

Swara:Good Morning Dad (and she again slept on his lap hugging him tightly)

Shekhar:Good morning Princess....

After few minutes Swara woke up and sat on the bed in front of shekhar...

Swara:Dad u here early in the morning..

Shek: So I can't come here in morning (fake angry)

Swara: no dad nothing like that u can come whenever u want... Woh toh I was just asking to know if you have any work with me..??

Shekhar:Woh Shona me and your mom have to go to Pune in afternoon... You remember your uncle in Pune... He is not well bacha.. We would come by afternoon tomorrow but today night we would not be here

Swara:Han oky Papa..!! No problem

Shekhar:no problem kya beta...you don't remember that tomorrow is your birthday... And how would I wish u at night

Swara: Awww Papa koi baat nhi na...u would come by afternoon tomorrow na... So no issues

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College

Sanskar was finding Akshat.... Akshat was the only person who could help Sanskar...

Finally he found Akshat in canteen

First Sanskar made sure that Swara was not present there then he went towards Akshat

Sanskar: Akshat...!!

Akshat turned and saw Sanskar

Akshat:Hi Sanskar, come sit

Sanskar& Akshat sat down

Sanskar was finding words to tell Akshat abt his realization

Akshat: Sanskar you want to say something

Sanskar: Hmmm yes actually

Akshat: Come on go on... I know it is regarding Swara

Sanskar became surprised that how he go to know

Akshat: now don't ask that how I got to know...

After few moments of silence Sanskar spoke...

Sanskar: Akshat I have realized that I love Swara (Sanskar was waiting for his reaction but he just smiled)

Sanskar: you will not say anything

Akshat: No... Because I already new that one day u will surely realize and c the day came

Sanskar: I want to confess my feelings to her...

Akshat: I'm so happy for cupcake...
So any plans???

Sanskar : I want to make it simple... And I want to confess my feelings tonight... Tomorrow is Swara's birthday

Akshat: Superb then Sanskar, today aunty-uncle went to Pune... So u can easily do your work... It would be the best gift for her...

Sanskar: Oky then... But I need your help...

Akshat: ya say

(They discussed something which would be revealed soon )

Precap - Confession
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Oky guys I know u all were eagerly waiting for the confession chapter... And CONFESSION would be shown in the next chapter

Actually this chapter or we can say that this part I wrote last week... And according to my plans confession was to be shown in this epi only... But while writing I felt that this past has nothing to do with confession and as I want confession chapter solely containing swasan so m posting this much part as Chapter 9(B)

I'll update the confession part on Sunday positively so u don't have to wait for too long...!!!

The story is gradually moving towards it's end so I would request the silent readers to comment....
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Since yesterday a lot of arguments r going on.... I don't want to comment on anyone but I would just say that guys My Shubhi Di is neither rude nor jealous of anyone... She's one of the best admin this page could get (obviously Goldie Di and Riddhima Di u two r also in the line without u three this page is nothing) ... And a wonderful writer indeed... So I would just request u all to respect her and the efforts which she made for this page...
U all r mature enough to judge right or wrong so no comments on that...

Friday, 23 June 2017

My Secret Lover by Shreeyu

Posted by Unknown on June 23, 2017 with No comments

#My_Secret_Lover

#Chapter_9

Note-Do read the message at the last

It had been a month since Swara last met Sanskar

Their results came and now Sanskar was in last year while Swara was in third year

Day by day Sanskar was becoming more restless
Until the day Swara decided to part their ways he never realized the importance of Swara in his life

Things were gradually entering his mind that his life was so colorful with her , and now when she is not by his side everything looks so faded and boring…
Her talks , her thoughts, her actions and small small gestures were wat made his day bright…
No matter wat the problem was they both always found the solution in one another….
It is truly said that “We don’t know the value of a person until he is gone” and this is what was happening with Sanskar… He was missing her gradually with the passing days,hours , minutes and seconds he was knowing her value, he was just missing her presence…Once his side which was filled with HER PRESENCE, was now empty not empty hollow in HER ABSENCE

Today was a Saturday evening and like any other week he was moving towards the beach , the only place where he feels relaxed, The beautiful sunset somewhere give peace to his soul….

He was sitting on the sand when his eyes fell on a girl who was running with an ice candy and behind her a boy was running
This scene made him remember how much they enjoyed when they came here once
When her ice candy fell down she took his ice candy and started running across the sand with him chasing her
He closed his eyes and a smile appeared on his lips remembering their masti

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Swara was sitting in her room engrossed in her books when she heard voice of a cuckoo… She went towards the window and closed her eyes remembering something

( FLASHBACK STARTS

Swasan were siting on a bench in college garden , they were just talking randomly when Swara heard Cuckoo’s voice

She immediately closed her eyes and started praying something by joining her hands… Sanskar was looking at her confused trying to understand what is she doing
The minute she opened her eyes sanskar asked her
Sanskar: Swara wat were u doing?

Swara:I was making a wish…!

Sanskar: Y so suddenly?

Swara:I heard a cuckoo singing and people say that if we make a wish at that tym it gets fulfilled

Sanskar narrowed his eyes:You believe this?

Swara:Ummm to be true I don’t know, but what’s wrong in trying, there is no loss if ur wish gets fulfilled

Sanskar: You and your beliefs (smiling genuinely)

Swara (monologue):Sanskar I don’t know whether this wish would be fulfilled or not but my all time wish is your happiness

FLASHBACK ENDS….)

Swara opened her eyes and a tear rolled down her right cheek remembering their moments

Truly life was beautiful having him by her side

She remembered the several encounters which she had with him in these last 35 days… Each tym Swara ignored him or simply looked somewhere else and moved from that place…
She also had her own life and gradually she was learning to stay without him…Life never ends if u don’t have someone in your life
Life is meant to move on with tym,
She was just happy that everything was falling in place now , she was no more a hurdle in his life
But she was sad , it was difficult for her to stay without him, each time she thinks that he would be no longer by her side , this lone thought breaks her heart into several pieces… She is just trying to believe that everything will fall at it’s right place with tym…

Her thoughts were disturbed by a phone call….

_on call_

Swara:Han Akii Bolo (Yes Akii say)

Akii:Cupcake we have to go their house in evening…Inform Aunty-Uncle too…

Swara: Oky Akii, I’ll tell them…

Akii:Hmmm…(after pause) Cupcake listen

Swara:Han say

Akii:Swara elders have to reach there till 8… How abt we can go a little late… U know na m not so comfortable with these functions… And… (Interrupted)

Swara: Han Akii, no problem even I don’t want to go early…That idiot girl there irritates me a lot…

Akii:Hahaha … How can I forget that…oky so see u in evening… Bubyee

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Night

Sanskar was down near the main gate, he had some work in the secretary’s office that is near the main gate, when he was coming outside he saw Swara And Akshat coming there , he was mesmerized to see Swara she was in Pink and white Anarkali suit…

He could hear them talking

Swara:U idiot who told u to park the car outside han…(Slapped his head)

Akii:I was in hurry to drop mom na…

Swara:Akii suno, I know this is not the right time to ask this, not even the right place but I think I should ask it before reaching there

(Sanskar came a little more near to them to hear what Swara is saying)

Akii: I know what you wanna say cupcake, but do you think I really love her?

Swara: According to me u do, but u shud be knowing it well Akii,not me…

Akii:But…(interrupted)

Swara:Achha tell me one thing you would be meeting her after 2long years…So u missed her or not…?

Akii:I did cupcake, I missed her a lot, every time we did something that is her favorite, I felt lonely…

Swara: Well this is quite filmy, but you try it… Chalo come on close ur eyes and c whose face appears before your eyes!!!

(Hearing it Sanskar too closed his eyes and Swara’s smiling face came in front of his eyes followed by her sad and tear eyes when they parted the hug a month ago)

Sanskar:(monologue) That means I love Swara, I love her (but suddenly realized ) no no how can it be it is just friendship nothing more…(he came in sense when Akshat shouted)

Akii:Swara… Swara (sanskar became tensed listening Swara he thought her face came in front of his eyes) Cupcake it is Aditi’s face… That means do I love her?

Swara: Akii this was just to satisfy u, it doesn’t matter whose face appears in front of ur eyes when u close them… But the feelings that you have for that person matter… U miss her when she’s not with u, u remember her while doing small small things, her smile her happiness r important for you…you don’t want to c her with any another boy… That’s it Akii, now also u r confused that u love her or not…Don’t waste more time Akii (starts walking again) You never know what happens the next in your life, u r there with someone now but we never know that destiny separates u from that person the very next second…
(A lone tear escaped her eyes)

Swara: And Akii , her parents r soon going to find her better half u better confess your feelings because she also loves u… (Said the last line in little slow tone…

Akii nodded but as soon as the last words got registered in his mind he ran behind Swara with a happy face, who was now running towards the car…

Here Sanskar was in deep thoughts , he was just trying to decide what he feels for Swara, he started walking towards his block absent mindedly

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Night (1am(

Sanskar was walking to and fro in his room, he was unable to sleep …. His thoughts were completely occupied by Swara today… He was just thinking wat is correct and wat is incorrect… Just then his eyes fell on his diary ….

Sanskar picked the diary and got seated on his bed… He started reading his diary from the day he met Swara

He was going through the diary and while turning the pages his smile was never leaving his lips…
Just then something struck his tube light brain… He realized that Swara is the same girl whose assignment he returned, when she was in first year… The same girl who denied to follow the command of her seniors, and the same girl from whose boldness he was impressed

Then he continued reading the diary… With each passing page, he was getting sure of his feelings…

After one hour he got up, and moved towards the balcony… He raised his head to look in the sky, which was twinkling with millions of stars, and the moon was almost full as the next day was full moon night…

He smiled broadly looking up,

Sanskar:So Sanskar Maheshwari is in LOVE finally… Miss SWARA DIXIT u r successful in making this jerk fall for u….. (He was so happy to realize his feeling but was sad too to remember Swara’s tears)

Precap: ~ Confession ~

Hello guys , I know m late but I really can’t help it… I have something very important to tell and pls read it patiently….

First of all THANK YOU so much for your comments on previous part, m really glad to know u all liked it…

U all would be aware that the new academic session had started… And in my case it started from 3rd April… M bound by a hectic schedule , with school, coaching classes,then assignments and most importantly studies…. And in all this mess I only get few minutes between these things, so I manage to read your ffs in this time, and to think abt writing something in between all this is not my cup of tea…
So I genuinely request u all to cooperate with me… With your support and cooperation I was able to write till this date but from this year situations r not in my favor… I know some of u would be feeling that m being way too dramatic but this is the truth guys and most of u r students and u all know it is somewhere a bit easier to write in college days as compared to school days…
To be very honest I was thinking to discontinue my stories, but this would be like splashing a bucket full of water on the hardwork I did till day and also on your support and wishes… So now I have dropped this idea but I can only post on holidays like my institution gave me two holidays for easter now next update depends on my institution
I hope you will consider my request and cooperate with me
Will be waiting for your reviews

Regards

Shreeya

Thursday, 22 June 2017

My Secret Lover by Shreeyu

Posted by Unknown on June 22, 2017 with No comments

#My_Secret_Lover

#Chapter_8

Note- Proof Reading not done

Next day

Swara was moving towards the canteen in lunch break when she bumped into Sanskar

Swara:Ouch (She raised her head to look at the person and it was none other than her, oops only Sanskar)

Sanskar was looking at her , wanted to say something...Whole night infact all three days when he was away from the city he was thinking just abt her proposal, just abt her (but still he didn't loved her)and he was not at all angry on her but just little hurt as she had hidden such a big thing from him

He wanted to tell her that he is not upset with her, he don't want to break their friendship... He's oky if she loves him but he can't reciprocate her feelings not because he loves some one else but because he don't want to fall in love and put his carrier at stake
Not because he don't like the feeling of love or he hates love but because he just had planned his life in that way... Falling in love at this age according to him will lead to distractions
He wants to tell her that he completely respects her feelings and he doesn't have any problem with that but somewhere in his heart he still feels that may be she is having a feeling of attraction towards him, may be it will fade with time... May be it will disturb her carrier...
More than being tensed for himself he's worried for her... Because he knows that because of this sudden revelation she will be distracted.... If he'll continue his friendship with her, then also distraction would be there and if he stops talking to her or in a sense breaks his friendship then it is obvious that it will worsen the situation

His thoughts were broken when Swara broke their eyelock
Swara: I'm so...sorry... (Saying so she turned to leave and walked to steps hurriedly but Sanskar held her wrist and made her turn again)

Again their eyes met each other
Sanskar's eyes were showing worry towards her and care while her eyes showed hidden love, pain and most important guilt... Yes, she was guilty, guilty of confessing her feelings to him& guilty of creating unnecessary disturbances in his life

She lowered her eyes not wanting to look into his eyes which had the power to make her fall for him more and more

Swara: Yes San....Yes!!..!!

Sanskar: I need to talk to u Swara (softly )

Swara: Woh m little busy now...Any important work

Sanskar: Yes can we meet after college? (Expecting a yes)

Swara: Woh...Woh(fumbling with words)Han Woh m busy after college

Sanskar knew that she's telling a lie but he just can't leave her like this she will surely make her a devdass if he would not talk to her

Sanskar: Oh oky!!!
It's oky you complete your work...let's meet in evening after dinner... Near r park in front of B-Block

Swara was not able to find any reason to deny so just nodded in acceptance and left the place in hurry

Night

Park

Sanskar was sitting on a bench and was seeing the surroundings, it was such a good environment here, cool breeze was blowing, old people who came down for walk were walking and talking in grps... Children were playing in the kids park near the park .... Some ladies hopefully mother of the kids playing were busy chatting and looking after their kids playing there
The environment was so calm and relaxing, but here he was sitting trying to prepare himself to talk to Swara... He didn't wanted to make any wrong move now

After some moments Swara came there, she was not looking that cheerful as always no charm was there on her face instead she was looking very upset and tired, no matter if she was not talking to Sanskar but her were enough for him to understand her problems... If not exactly , he could actually guess 70% right

He felt sad when he saw Akshat coming with her

{Swara finished her dinner  and called Akshat to come to her house as she wants to talk to him something important after confirming that he also had his dinner
After sometime he arrived she was standing at the doorframe of the house only, watching the park from the corridor
(Gals corridor is having a clear view of parking lot really don't know how to explain it but yeah it's not my imagination this all is the view of my cousin's apartments )

Swara: Akii... Let's go down for a walk... C breeze is so cool and weather is also good

Åk: Oh come cupcake (he actually wanted to ask her why , but later dropped this idea as he felt that she'll feel better after having a walk it woud refresh her mind. .. .}

Akshat saw Sanskar there and understood that why Swara brought him here

They reached near Sanskar...
Sanskar stood up and akshat went and said a hi to him
Akshat:Hi Sanskar!! Seeing u after long tym (trying to sound normal as if he don't know anything abt Swara's confession)

Sanskar also tried to behave normal

Sanskar:Hello Akshat...Ya I went out of city for sme work...

(Swara felt a little relaxed that he was not absent due to her)

Åk:Oh

Akshat was feeling awkward while Swara was activated on silent mode she was not speaking anything

Akshat thought to excuse himself just that his phone ranged he thanked the caller in mind and left from there excusing himself
Akshat: I'll be back in sometime... Excuse me

Now only swasan were left there

Swara was looking at the ground or everywhere except looking at him
And he was looking at her thinking how to start the conversation

After few minutes of silence, Sanskar broke the silence

Sanskar: Swara

She looked towards him and just hummed: Hmmm

Sanskar:(directly coming to the point) Why r you ignoring me Han?

Swara:No Sanskar, m never ignoring you...(interrupted)

Sanskar: See Swara there is no use of telling a lie... You also no it very well and even I know...(interrupted BH Swara)

Swara(teary eyed): So why were you asking this if u know me so well... Y r u meeting me again n again...

Sanskar: Swa(interrupted)

Swara:U know it na Sanskar that m feeling guilty of my actions...I'm not sure what should I do... U know m just cursing that day when we went to that party... But in a sense it is good... Atleast u got to know my true face... U came to know that I love u... But this is half truth Sanskar , in these years I never confessed my feelings not because I was afraid of Ur reaction... But I never wanted to be a hurdle in your life... And c I only messed everything (saying so she started crying but not so loud that everyone will c them )

Sanskar held her hand and made her sit on the bench

He himself sat on the ground on his knees

Sanskar: Swara first stop crying... U have not done anything wrong it was just you were not in senses and u spitted out everything in a little wrong manner... M not angry with you na

Swara(slow voice): but I cheated r friendship na by hiding this, I betrayed u

Sanskar: Swara u r not understanding

Swara:No, Sanskar I understood everything now, I know m late but now I'm right... U know trust is the base of every relationship be it friendship only and by hiding my honest feelings, I did wrong... I know you would have felt very bad listening to all that but still u dropped me home... You were always a true friend

Sanskar: No Swara don't be guilty of anything , if I can't reciprocate your feelings we can atleast continue r friendship...haina?

Swara: No Sanskar I don't want to be a burden on u... After this revelation I know awkwardness is developed between us, by seeing my face you would actually remember that I love u again n again which will lead to problems and now even I would not be able to stay with u like before...

Sanskar: So what Do u want?(softly)

Swara stood up and turned another side closing her eyes she tightly fisted her fingers
Swara:Let's part r ways Sanskar... Let's forget everything...You move on your way and I'll move on my, let's forget that we are...no we were friends (tears escaped her eyes)this is only the solution (wiped her tears quickly without his notice and turned with a smile)
And don't think that I'll be sad , I'll be happy with this...Do u agree with it?

(Dilon ki mohabbat ko baandhe kyun
Haaye re!
Dilon ki mohabbat ko baandhe kyun
Haaye re!
Daayre.. daayre..
Daayre.. daayre..)

Initially Sanskar did not wanted to do this but he also knew that she's saying correct, this can only be the solution because staying together will lead to a lot many problems between them

He nodded his head in acceptance

Sanskar: But we will never hesitate if we would need each other's help... We will directly ask each other for help...
I'll be always there for u Swara...
Oky and don't worry now and don't be guilty just stay happy...and take care

( Hain kyun faasle darmiyaan leke aaye re
Hain kyun faasle darmiyaan leke aaye re
Daayre.. daayre..
Daayre.. daayre...)

Swara nodded smilingly
At one side her heart was paining doing this while on other side she was feeling better after talking to him and parting their ways for their own welfare

(Kaanch ke wo khwaab
naazuk the humare saare
Chhoone se hi tootne lage
Mannaton mein umr bhar ka
saath jinka manga
Humsafar wo chhootne lage)

Both moved two-three steps in opposite direction when they both turned around to look at another at same time
They had a short eyelock
Where Swara's eyes were showing pain, love and satisfaction whereas his eyes showed an unknown sadness that he would miss his best friend...

Breaking the eyelock Swara ran towards him and hugged him with such force that he stumbled a little but later stood straight
His hands also reached the her back reciprocating the hug whereas her hands were around his back

Both stood there like this only for few seconds but they were like ages for them
She felt so happy and emotional as it was their first and last hug according to them
And Sanskar also felt unknown happiness and pain knowing it was their first and last hug so he also hugged her back without thinking anything

(Na marna munasib
Jiya bhi naa jaaye re
Na marna munasib
Jiya bhi naa jaaye re
Haaye re!
Daayre.. daayre..
Daayre.. daayre..

Oo… na na..)

Breaking the hug and murmuring a sorry quickly Swara ran to her block without looking back at Sanskar

And Sanskar was standing there only... Seeing her going away from him

To be continued...

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Thnk you to the ones who commented on last Chapter... Response was disappointingly low but today I would not ask for comments...
Because when I ask u all to comment or post a note stating my disappointment u people take it completely wrong

So comment u feel to, otherwise leave it

To all the people who were commenting that note was not for you people cause m grateful to you all but to silent readers I can only say that break Ur silence if u want

Wednesday, 21 June 2017

Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya by Zuzu Part 11

Posted by Unknown on June 21, 2017 with No comments

#Aur_Pyaar_Ho_Gaya

Hello readers!! (SwaSanians n SanskaarHolics lyk me :p )

Many of ua disappointed by previous part as it was shrt.. n more over by "Precap" bt guys think.. swasan shud realise for each other.. nw am just showing SwaSam dance.. dat ua not lyking wht about d coming twist which I'll give in further part's..?? Guys ders lots more to come.. so wait.. n yes swasan will confess wait for a perfect timing.. so not wasting much tym back to our swasan ..

Recap of part #10 -"Full of swasan scnes.. N swara leaves with Sam for night out with frnds.. at Ridz farmhouse out of city"

#part_11

Sanskaar goes to his place.. Gets fresh n had a bright smile on his face.. yes d reason fr dz smile was nly n nly Swara.... He was thinking about d recent movements with swara.. He hits his head slightly while smiling n says to himself -"Sanskaar ye kya ho raha h.. Kya Jadu chl gaya.. Am always thinking about Swara.. Muje lagta h bol du bs.. bt agar mujsy dur ho gai toh I dnt want to loose her.. bt I want her in my life forever.. agar mene kuch kia nahi toh koi or usko le kr cala jaayga (Koi or - Sam) kuch toh krna hoga na.. phle I need to find wht she feels.. muje usko pyaar ka ehsaas dilana hoga.. fir jld hi ill propose her n make her as " SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESWARI " Wow sounds perfect.. "

He gets a call..

Lady -"Hello sanskaar k sa h tu.. Manne phn b na karta.. Bhul gaya h apni maa ko"

Sanskaar - " No mom Esa nahi h.. Me nahi bhula hu aap ko aap toh janti hi h na ki me.... (He stops here) "

Sujata - " Ha chora Janu hu me.. Tu apna khayal rakna.. Raat ko thand me jyada bhar mat rhna..Nahi toh bimar pad javega "

Sanskaar - " Haa mom.. thik h abb me baad me baat krta hu ek important kaam h"

Sujata -"Haa thik h chora.. Khyal rakna apna "

Call disconnects..

Der swara reached to Guest house.. she was shock to see it was all decorated.. with flowers.. candles.. music.. she was shocked to see dz all... she ask -"Ye Sab Kya H ? Hum toh yaha night out k lie aaye the na den.. "

By d tym all frnds come to n say -"Swara it's a party.. n ha humne tuje night out ka bol dia cz tu nahi aaygi.. "

Swara - " Bt guys Kiski party ?? "

Niel -"Voh swara party krne k lie kya reason chiye jab man kare kar lo "

Swara - " Ok bt me ye dress me ?? "

Neha -"Meri barbie doll fiker mat jaa ja kr room me dek ull get ua dress for u to wear in d party.. "

Swara - " Bt ye sab krne ki kya zaroorat thi"

Avi - "Abb swara jao n get changed plzx sab aajaynge "

Swara - " Ok ok abi aati hu "

She leaves..

Ridz -"Sam plz aaj tu usko propose kr hi dena.. plz "

Avi-"Haa Sam plz hum sab k couples h tum dono b couple ban jaoge.. Plz aaj usko bol de "

Sam - " Ok aaj me usko propose kr k rahunga "

Ridz -"Dats lyk d dude.. ye party h hi islie k do love birds mil jaye.."

Dey All give hi-fi

Now guys abb kya hoga ?? Our poor sanskaar...

Swara goes to room n sees d ... packet.. she opens itt... It was a beautiful white shoulder less gaun with light blue patern design on itt.. It was a cute attire... For our cute princess.. with contrast light blue earrings.... she got ready.. she made her hair styled in bun... with a diamond tiara.. In a crown style...

It was a mask party theme... all guests started to come... All were wearing masks..

Der sanskaar was feeling restless.. he donno wht was goin to happen bt he could feel dat something.. wrong will b happen.. he decides to go der.. - " I need to go der... muje kuch acha feel nahi ho raha h..bt k se address..Shit man "

He hits his hand on d table.. den he remembers something n smiles ...

Flash back :-
Whn Sam came to pick up swara . He told -"Are swara jldi chl.. xyz pr pohchne hume 30 mints lagege.. "
Swara - " Haa chl "

Flash back ends

Sanskaar just weared a black blazer.. he was already in his black jeans n red shirt.. Black n red combination made him look more attractive.. n White....

He leaves for d farmhouse.... 

Swara came down.. frm up stairs all d eyes were on her.. she was looking like a angel.. her doe eyes.. her red rosy lips which holded d most prettiest smile in d whole wrld.. her way of walking.. her gaun.. back on the stairs... d pendent gifted by sanskaar was making her look more bueatiful ...

In no tym sanskaar arrived at d farmhouse... he was amazed.. as per her info it was a frnds night out .. bt here totally it was a different thing.. It was a party.. masked was given by d person standing at d entrance.. he goes n takes a silver mask.. wears it n goes inside.. he saw sid.. was surrounded by his frnds.. he too wearing a red shirt with black jeans n Black blazer.. He saw his frnds were teasing him.. he went beside n took a drink.. n listing wht was dey talking...

Niel -"bro swara is looking amazing... Aaj toh tu gaya.. abb jldi se bol de usko ki u love her "

Avi-"Yeah aaj Swara ko ha bolna hi hoga..

Sam - " Haa bol dunga aaj usey.. bt Dance k baad phle party hone do... "

Sanskaar listing all dz Got very angry he flt lyk someone was talking his breath away from him..

Den he saw swara coming towrds Drinks corner.. Sam n his frnds were standing der..

A big smile appeared on his face...  bt it vanished n as soon as Avi said to sam

Avi saw swara frm a distance n teases.. Sam -"Sam dek bhabhi aagai... Wow bhabhi is looking so cute"

Niel -"No avi Bhabhi is not just looking she is Looking sooo hot!! "

He was fuming with anger... Listing "Bhabhi n Hot wrds for her love"

Sam blushed -"Chup karo tum dono"

He got anger on swara for wearing such drss.. Ys it was bueatiful n she was looking like princess.. bt for it was like.. swara cn wear such dress only for her prince dat is Sanskaar
..
he dint like anyone seeing like dz.. In dat way.. For him she was now his.. For whom he can do anything..

swara came near Sam n Sam gave him a silver mask to wear..

All were wearing mask In d party.... Lights went deem.. Dj was supposed to play songs for dancing.. Der were balloons all over...

Sam asked swara for d dance.. swara could not resist as he was her frnd..

All couples began to dance.. Soon Swara n Sam were on d floor....

Sanskaar was very hurt and angry at d same tym.. His heart was paining seeing his love with someone else... N more thing was hurting him was Sam was goin to propose today... He was getting a feeling ki swara will go away from him

Song started -"Pehli dafa (I'll not add my fave here romantic.. cz I want dat sngs fr swasan so am adding dz one) 

Dey were soon on floor n sng started

Sam's one hand on her waist n one hand holding her hand.. Swara's one hand on his shoulder.. and other in his hand...

🎤🎤 "Pehli dafa hua h kya me muj me nahi hua jaane kya... Pehli dafa hua h kya me muj Me nahi hua jaane kya... 🎤🎤

Lights were dim n all were dancing slowly...

Sanskaar eyes were becoming red due to seeing d closeness of Swara And Sam..

Sam was looking in her eyes.. with lots of love.. 

🎤🎤Aksar khayalon me dil sochta...Tuj se h sayad koi waste... Firse tu aaye tu baru ... 
Khwaishen teri me karne laga ... khwaishon me teri behne laga fida kya tuj pe me hone laga .. hmmm ..🎤🎤

Sam holds her finger n makes her turn round..

Sanskaar was unable to control dz .. where as Avi.. Ridz.. Niel n Neha were smiling n giving hifi to each others...

🎤phli dafa hua h ye kya 🎤🎤

Music was goin on Sam made put her hands on her shoulder..
Sanskaar jealously crossed all d limits.. he was fuming with anger...

🎤 os ki bundo me asq tera...saya tera.. chra tera... rang dhoop se bhi h sunhera.. Jis pe thra.. man ye mera....
Guzri h chu kr k aarzoo.. fir se tu aaye rubaru..
Khwaishen teri me karne laga
Khwaishon me teri behne laga
fida kya tuj pe me hone laga .....aaaa mmmm

Phli dafa hua h ye kya.. 🎤🎤

Swara laughed.. In middle as Sam came near her ear n said something..

Dz made sanskaar even more furious..

Dey were dancing..

As it was a game typ dance of changing partners with changing sngs.. It was a vry large hall.. d environment was filled with totall romance n ppl with masks..

Sanskaar got on stage with a girl... n strted dancing..

Sng ended soon.. as it was a partner changing game..  All had to change der partners..

(Dnt wry SwaSan hoga.. i will try to make u ppl happy )

Sng changed.. Sam started to dance with other girl.. where as swara had to dance with Sanskaar.. swara was unaware day he was sanskaar behind d mask... Sanskaar was full in anger.. n strted to dance with swara with so much aggression(I love jjatke wala dance so.. push krna pull krna dat typ.. salsa typ :p kaash I can shw u ppl dz typ swasan dance..)

Song was - "hua hai aaj phli baar " (My fave)
Music strted.. Sanskaar pulled swara towrds him.. swara looked in his eyes.. It had pain.. passion... love.. Anger..

Swara was thinking -"Ye muje ese q kr raha h.. n who is he "

He hold her waist tightly.. catches her hand and one hand on his shoulder ...

🎤🎤🎤🎤  
Hua hai aaj phli baar..
Jo ese muskuraya hu..
Tumhe deka toh jana ye
Ke q duniya me aaya hu... 🎤🎤🎤

Der was a continuous eyelock.. his grip was Tight on her waist.. she was lost in his eyes.. Dey were dancing with so much of Passion

🎤🎤ye jaan lekar k jaa meri Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon..
Main tumse ishq karne ki Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon🎤🎤🎤

He pushes swara.. catches her right hand in his left hand ... den pull her in such a way sat she rolls on his left hand and fall on his right hand.. his right hand catching her waist.. She was staring in his eyes.. he again pulls her up.. n dey have a passionate back hug.. her he closes his eyes n relax his chin on her shoulder.. shw too closed her eyes.. she was goin through na unknown feeling a feeling which was very Awsm... she dint knew it was sanskaar.. bt she was not uncomfortable at his touch...

🎤🎤🎤Zameen se aasmaan tak hum Dhoondh aaye jahaan saara Banaa paaya nahi ab tak Khuda tumse koi pyaara 🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤

His hands were on his belly.. N her hands was on his hands.. He took her right hand n point towrds Sky (sealing) she looked in his eyes frm d corner of her eyes.. Her hand remain same he passed his right hand n fingers frm her right hand fingers to her shoulders..

Niel neha.. Avi n Ridz.. was complimenting hw dey are dancing.. dey thought it was Sam with swara..

Neha-"Wow kitna romantic dance h na dono ko dekh esa lagta h kahi kho gaye v h yaha h hi nahi"

Avi - "Haa yaar Sam pata nahi tha itna romantic n aggressive dance b krta h "

🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤
Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan
Sab bewajah ki hain taarifiyaan ...

Main likh doon aasmaan par ye Ke padh lega jahaan saara Huaa na hoga ab koi Yahan hum do sa dobara....

Main duniya bhar ki taarifein Tere sajde mein laaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon..🎤🎤🎤🎤

He sees her.. looking at her side n she sees him.. facing her back towrds him.. she puts her left hand on his left cheek..

He lifts her up from her waist.. her hands were on his shoulders ... n her legs pointed in opposite direction.. Dey looked in each others eyes...  He was still angry.. and was dancing in rude (means dur krna pass lana push krna pull krna.. ek aggression wala dance **dnt mind guys I love such typs of Dances...**)

🎤🎤🎤🎤
Tu Hai jo rubaru mere
Bada mehfooz rehta hoon
Tere milne ka shukrana Khuda se roz karta hoon....

Humko pata hai yeh nadaniyaan hain
Aawara dil ki hai aawariyan

Yeh dil pagal bana baitha Isey ab tu hi samjha de
Dikhe tujhme meri duniya Meri duniya tu banja re....🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤🎤

He keeps swara down holds her frm her waist n she bend on her back side.. Sanskaar sees some boys seeing her backless n shoulder less drss are seeing her with bad sight.. n gesturing each other..

First of all he was fuming with anger..got more angry on her drss.. no dout she was looking fab ... bt He dnt want any one to see her lyk dat.. with a bad sight..

He pulls her up.. her hands were on is shoulders.. dey were so close .. We can say a mini hug ... his hands were on her back.. he took his right hand up towrds hers n opens d bun... her bueatiful long hairs falls.. covering her back.. n shoulders.. she looked in his eyes.. It was filled with anger .. she dint knew wht was her mistake n who was he..

🎤🎤🎤Hoon khushkismat jo kismat se Tumhe aise main paaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki Ijaazat Rab se 🎤🎤❤🎤❤

Song ends.. (I wish guys ki ye dance me aap ko dika paati... i wish u all could see my dz dance imagination.. did u imagine wht I've written den plz tell me )

Precap -"Kya hoga guys will swara able to knw d guy which she danced was non other than sanskaar... Will Sam propose swara... Hw swara will react.. will she accept d proposal .... or else Sanskaar will stp him "

Give your views guys n wht u want in nxt part ??

******To Be Continued******

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#Patel

Swasan A path to Love (Season II) Ep 6

Posted by Fantasy Diaries on June 21, 2017 with 11 comments

If there was any punishment of the sins, he did, that there was.

No matter, how much he wanted to wake up and saw the alluring face of his lover, he couldn’t. He couldn’t open his eyes, couldn’t touch her, even he couldn’t move a very little bit. He never felt this much helplessness in his life. Even, not when Meera left him or his family disowned him.
He had to open his eyes, he had to save his wife from this cruel, no matter what it took.
Those Gods should listen to him and disentangled himself from the cage of helplessness, they had to. No matter what, but they had to.
Why didn’t Gods release him from the dungeon of his body, to let him fly from this fleeting world, if they didn’t want to wake him up.
He damn on himself, specially when his wife came to him, sang a sweet lullabies to their child.
Their child…he paused.
His child was born, it was one month, he born. He remembered the time, that time Shanaya was with him and confessing her love to him and still praying for his happiness with Swara.
“You know Sanskar! After your marriage, I sometime, felt jealous with Swara and regretted for my decision to not to marry you”
He felt his left hand under her soft hands, which seemed a little bit rough as compared to their past life. He delved that she wasn’t caring herself like she did in her past.
Her melodious yet broken voice echoed in his ears.
She was like broken glass, beautiful, but harmful. He didn’t see her, but he was known for his intelligence, so he could feel clearly.
And he knew the reason of her broken self very well.
“You know, I condemned myself many times to think about it. To feel jealous from Swara. You know, I was happy for you, but still there was little bit pain to think that I was not a reason for your happiness. But still, how stubborn I’m! To pray for your happiness with Swara. I know I couldn’t give you what she was giving you…damn! What she’s giving you..”
He felt wetness on the back of his hand and he knew, it wasn’t drops of water. He knew, clouds were not crying, but someone’s eyes.
“You know, where is she? She’s in labor and I just wanted you to be there. To see your child when he would born. To console her. But you’re not here, I’m here with but I’m not with you in reality. Swara is alone, you’re alone and I have been always alone…”
The rain was increasing on his hand.
“Sometimes, I wonder what destiny wants from us? Everything is ruined”
He heard hiccups.
“Oh! I shouldn’t tell you this type of things. The good thing is that soon your child will come into this world. I don’t know, what type of reaction you gave, if you’re awake. Because I knew, you never wanted a child”
The rain halted.
“But I know, you’ll accept your flesh and blood. It took time, if you’re awake, but you’ll.. Of course, Sasha is right to say that blood is thicker than water”
He felt rainbow after he heard her melodious genuine chuckling.
And there it was the time, he felt the touch of his boy.
He didn’t understand why there was butterfly in his stomach.
The skin was so soft, just like petal of flowers, which he brought from Shanaya’s school boy to help him financially, without pitying on him. Because he knew, how much pride hurt with pity.
He felt tiny hand’s grip on his finger and wetness again.
“Look! Sanskar, he likes you…”
He heard the exclamation of his wife.
“Swara! With ease Chori!” It was his mother and he could understand the wet happiness in her voice.
He wanted that time to see the face of his mother. It was long time, since he saw her. And it was a very long time, since he hugged her and felt her motherly love towards him.
Even, long ago, he forgot about that he had a family, beside his close ones.
Now, he wanted to talk with them, hugged them and wanted to say that he had forgiven them, they forgave him.
But he knew, already that his family had forgiven him.
He often, felt their touch on his hand, especially his parents.
He first time, felt tear of his father that day, when he thought everybody had left the room.
“Now, you’re a father Sanskar! I hope, you’ll understand my pain and forgive me… Just come back my son”
He felt ache in his heart to listen his proud father like this.
“Just come back. I can’t bear to see my young son lying like this”
After this, his father left, everyone left but his wife remained with him. With his child.
His child… It was foreign yet beautiful word for him.
He had to wake up.
He had to wake up..
Days passed,
He had do wake up.
But every effort met with futility.
Months passed and he felt his son crawling on him often.
He had to wake up.
More days passed, but still no avail.
One day, his Shanaya came to him.
Though, she often came to him, but he felt strange tone in her voice that time.
Swara was in hotel and she was handling with his kiddo.
He didn’t remember, how much time and effort she put to make sleep his naughty boy.
But he felt very slow snoring of him beside him.
His snoring suddenly realized him one more thing.
That his son also had asthma problem.
Damn on his cursed and sick self.
He didn’t want his son to adapt any other his sickness.
He wanted him to be like his mother.
Pure and bright.
Shanaya took his hand as usual, her thumb rubbed his knuckle gently, but with intensity.
He remembered the time, when they were sleeping partners.
After their session, she always did the same thing. Though, he never hugged her after their activity but still, he didn’t jerk his hand from her grasp. He could understand, it was her way to say that she cared…or loved.
“Sanskar! Doctors said, there is great improvement in your condition… We’re so happy, Swara and your family are happy…”
It was good news, but there was something else, she wanna tell. He knew her, like he knew himself and he knew that there was something else too.
“If you listen me…”
Pause,
“Come back..”
Again pause,
“She’s so lonely and tired without you”
Hiccup
“She would never say this, but I know very well that she is very tired.”
Again hiccup..
” You know, we did many crimes to make you.. make us successful.. Now she’s lifting the weights of our sins..”
Tears,
“You know ne Sanskar! How world is. I can understand the hollowness of her eyes. I’m a woman, I know that..”
More tears,
“She would broke down soon. If you do not come to take your responsibility to let her take hers. ”
His concentration went to his son.
“There was that bastard Khanna was harassing and blackmailing her. I and Laksh handled him. But you know, after him, many will come..”
Long pause.
“She is innocent and not a shrewd mind like us. She’ll be lost herself soon. We talked to her many times, but she doesn’t want to give up on your dream”
Sigh,
“If you don’t come soon. Soon…very soon. You’ll lost her..”
Exhaustion,
“Just come back Sanskar!”
Silence,
Voice of swishing.
She left,
More silence.
Tears on his cheek,
Snoring of his son,
Prayer..
“God! Not for me, but for my wife, just let me awake..”
More tears,
Silence,
Snoring
And his eyes went open

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Hey guys! Soooo sorry to not write for long time. Actually it’s all depend on mood and long ago, i lost the spirit to write. Now, i felt nostalgic and wanted to write this fiction again and in a better way. One more thing, actually nowadays I’m damn busy because of my freelancing job. So, if I won’t upload soon, please forgive me in advance.
Thanks to everyone for reading and sorry again. One more thing, i gave my fb ID. You can check on fb Saba Shiekh, my friend request is block I think, but you can message me.
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